I think you both need to elevate through this league if your gonna want to stay in it for long, but I think BostonLyricist had a better verse... this is the punch that won it for me

your skillz lack everything like an athlete wit no legs or arms...
your soft and dont last long like marshmellows from lucky charms... - Good Flow, couple decent lines there.
I think sdizzle coulda pulled this out but he stopped writing after 4 lines and the 4 lines weren't all that nasty.... Vote BostonLyricist. Good Luck in the future.

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