HERES A REAL VOTE

scriptive:

you think your good, this is where you get ink poisoned, ink-
your a gay faggot, his faveourite band is n-sync-
[COLOR=blue][SIZE=1][b]-conry ass opener
why you come up hating in my thread saying you the best-
my name is scriptive and your my unwelcome guest-
-aight, but use some wordplay

ill take out my glock, pump 5 slugs into your head-
you skinny fuck ill snap you like pencil lead-
-dont relate yourself to a gang when your just a white boy with a laptop

your unknown in this world your never going to make it-
i could kill your so easy just like lickety split-
-didnt rhyme, and you should have been banned for a line like this

this is where the crowd get all exited "ink's gonna choke"-
he's gonna black out fall on the floor and have a stroke-
-umm alright, still no wordplay and needs some structure

i think im about done with this bitch ass wigga-
your never coming back to this fool, ive just pulled the trigger-
-again, talking about physically killing when its a verbal battle, closure gets 3/10


ink:


(starts off slow)
why your text dont even flow, their just complete nonsense...
...only ILL review your verse would get, is ILLigiterate contents /1
-i understand the punch, but it could have hit harder with better structure

you dont make sense, why be independent when you could have simply just bit...
Quote:
Originally Posted by scriptive
i could kill you so easy just like lickety split-
-its true there is no feeding, but great idea, and great bar



(things pick up pace)
why you think im skinny, do you have to be so judgemental ?.. ( one tear falls )
...and why you rappin bout pumpin glocks, you just a thug rental /3
-cmfs, he was being sarcastic, i like this line, i was laughing, i think you were trying to say that scriptive is a wanna be thug, cause scriptives talkin about glocks and triggers.

i dont wanna put up wit your shit no more , my rhyme is through...
...im sick of educating this herban(urban) dude, now back to tie my shoe /4
-lol, nice closure, i give it a 7/10

now for the vote:
if your talking about the rules, yes ink did feed, but you broke a few rules yourself...
1.hate vote (poetic justice), only voted for you b/c he got in an argument with him as well as you did...
2.dick rider votes, you must have swayed ppl to come and explain these wack votes, cu the only one ive ever seen post in my life before is CMFS, ery one is a suspected dick rider.

so he fed, and you have d/r and hate.whats fair?

his verse was way better then that humiliation achieved versed you posted.

reason: better personals, better punches, his verse rhymed, structure was almost at its top, wordplay was great, creativity was alright, and he made me laugh with a few of his lines.

vote: ink

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