S
you think your good, this is where you get ink poisoned, ink-
your a gay faggot, his faveourite band is n-sync-
WACK!!!!!
why you come up hating in my thread saying you the best-
my name is scriptive and your my unwelcome guest-
WACK AGAIN
ill take out my glock, pump 5 slugs into your head-
you skinny fuck ill snap you like pencil lead-
no punch...wack
your unknown in this world your never going to make it-
i could kill your so easy just like lickety split-
doesnt rhyme...wack
this is where the crowd get all exited "ink's gonna choke"-
he's gonna black out fall on the floor and have a stroke-
gay...damn this is herb shit
i think im about done with this bitch ass wigga-
your never coming back to this fool, ive just pulled the trigger
wack closer

Your verse speaks for itself...wack wack wack...
no punches and no personals flow wasnt good
the only thing you had right was your struc
5/10

Ink
why your text dont even flow, their just complete nonsense...
...only ILL review your verse would get, is ILLigiterate contents /1
finally a punch
you dont make sense, why be independent when you could have simply just bit...
Quote:
Originally Posted by scriptive
i could kill you so easy just like lickety split-
ok....not really feedin so good

/2

(things pick up pace)
why you think im skinny, do you have to be so judgemental ?.. ( one tear falls )
...and why you rappin bout pumpin glocks, you just a thug rental /3
ha ha..ok could of done better with this one
i dont wanna put up wit your shit no more , my rhyme is through...
...im sick of educating this herban(urban) dude, now back to tie my shoe /4
ok closer could of done a little better

nice flow...you HAD punches no personals but a better flow that S

7/10

vote=ink

S you got d/r's to vote cuz if they were honest...they would say
your verse was just herbish