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Old 07-01-04, 05:00 PM   #9
Orijinal
Bitches I've Sonned
 
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
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Ima "Mac" this Burger King, right into the future
Hes earned more rights for gays then Martin Luther
Wack punchline..better than bk2dafuture though 4/10

advice: make more complex punchline than that...Hes earned more right for gays then Martin Luther?...ur sayin Martin Luther earned rights for gays...aint happnin...

your feeble attempt too reach me misses me by far\\
like a two year old at night trying ta grasp a star\\
WEAK WEAK WEAK..u needa try harder than that..2/10

advice: u needa pick up your vocabulary beter..far and star? easy..and try to make your punchlines more complex

both was wack..but gotta give it to da better punchline..NIGHTFIRE.

Vote-Nightfire
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both of yall hit me up in my current battle we need votes..vote honestly and professionally 1.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132752
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