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structure:verbal violence (both need work)
flow:verbal
punches:verbal(other guy had to many played ones)
i felt that verbal won, simply because the future talked about MJ's nose... if you used a played concept, you need to be clever with it or dont use it.. that is what lose him the battle, becuase he didnt really rhyme his words to well.. and is structure wasnt exactly up to par.. but it was a nice try.. stick with it..
both verses need to elevate a lil bit..
v/verbal
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