Infared... You gotta break up your verse with some kinda punctuation or spaces cuz it just don't look right the way you typed it... I think you tried to say too much in your verse and sometimes your lines stretched alot, keep on workin on it..
Hoops... The verse you posted wasn't bad, short to the point- First couple lines were o.k, didn't really feel the closer but your verse had enough power to pull this battle out... Vote Hoops. please return the favor .. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305

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