QB- Your Dominoes Line, and The Haymaker line were pretty decent... short verse to point- decent structure flowed pretty good... Lookin pretty good for someone new to the site... Good Luck in the future

Orijinal- Your Opener and the Runnin Erands lines were the best... Your structure was a little more disrupted in the battle, This is pretty close contest to me in my eyes so I just compared the two parts I liked best from each of your verses and the Runnin Erands line I think was the best punch in the battle... Vote Orijinal... Good Luck both of you... Please return the favor.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305

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