hmm
orijinal: good flow...ok structure..sick punches n personals..the opener was sickness...and the closer was aiight
you had no multi's that i saw
but you had some meta's
overall good shit
QB: good shit but put somethin after your lines like......... or -
didnt see too much multi's...ok meta's
good punches n personals
overall
vote: ORIJINAL
i aint gon' poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132255