hmm...
x-you had one or two ideas that i was feeling.. grain like rice was ok.. but the other parts needed some work...
rascal- your flow was coo on this one... first bar was hella shaky, the structure in it wasent working that well.. but it was a nice meta..over all your flow and rhyming approaches won this for you.. saw you took it quite easy in this one...
be care with that tho :O
v/rascal
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