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Old 07-01-04, 07:49 PM   #15
Tempa
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Krusty D - LOL. Opening was funny as hell...Give it to ya. Need to elevate lyrically. Only had on good punch. Structure was all mixed up too. 5/10

Insane16 - Not a bad verse. Ya had Good structure. But you lacked lyrically. It seems that you get a lot of props for punches but i didn't see any. Keep elevatin. 4.5/10

Vote - Krusty D
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