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Old 07-01-04, 08:32 PM   #13
DON
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one sided battle magician u took this.not bad they were prewrite but not bad it was ok cause anything coulda taken his verse.good flow.overdone u need longer lines and more complexity aight work on better punches especially openers and closers and personals and work on flow.magician gets my vote for punches and flow

v/magician
return the favor honest vote on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132645