i dont really like topic battles...its pretty easy for topics to be made...but anyways here i go:
DON: u had good verbal vocabulary...i didnt really like your opener it was kinna simple and everything..ur metaphors was good though i like that in topical battles even though i hate um lol...
C-Ballz: i like ur story a little more..its a little more creative and descriptive but i didnt like your metaphors as much as Don...thats why I gave you a big minus on the topic battle..
Vote- Don
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please hit up my current battle..we need votes....is a good battle 1
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132752