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Old 07-01-04, 09:54 PM   #9
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untouchable won tis battle....i could read his lyrics better and understand them...had a few better punches...............towards the end u strechd sum lines too far..
chris u had sum good hits in there but i think if you had shortened sum of those rhymes and and had a better structure u would have won.............




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