no no no sicwitit wat is this no rhymes man come on rhyme the first two lets get on this but nice multiple rhymes in the first line i liked that.u lacked good punches and personals man u got the potential i voted on 2 of ur battles and for some reason u jus dont link wit good punches but u can cause ur rhyming ability is good.aight nightvison great personal to open wit i liked it a lot.nice flow it was consistant. so for better personals and punches my vote goes to vision

v/nv