try again then fuck it...
-killah- this was ok for an opener 5/10
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Yo Night Vision its a Fight decision but ya dumb
Try to look in the future kid now ya 5-1
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-night vision- this was a better opener... good w/p and r/s 7/10
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introduce this wannabe faggot fuckin face to tha curb~
roll him up and smoke this cat cause he's a tru herb~
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-killah- ok rhyming... nothing else... no punch 3/10
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You think u spell sick smell sick but chould i care-less
To win this battle cry to god to get Blessed
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-night vision- nice flow w/p punch 7/10
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fuckin mushy faggot your rhymes i'll just str8 consume~
this guy couldnt get pussy if he lived in a woom~
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-killah- ok rhyming... ok closer 5/10
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The vision i see is ur little bitch ass losein Duke
Leave ya on tha floor like its a madden Juke
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-night vision- good r/s... good w/p... funny closer 7/10
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given this cat internal plus external fuckin wounds~
the only time he passin hot shit is when he gets gas from prunes~
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overall- nightvision had a better flow more consistent rhyme scheme
and came with harder punches...what more can i say
no hate but it wasn't really worth breaking down such a small verse
if you go to the rules it says all battles have to be 10 lines or more first