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Old 07-02-04, 09:24 AM   #6
TAKENOTICE
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Young Dez i liked your verse and the use of all the celeb references but it seemed you were more focused on that then attackin' The Star. Even though i really liked you Fat Joe line the pringles part was sorta play'd but still fit, My opinion is that you just didn't come at Star like she came at you, only becuase star came directly at you. The Lack Of Personals was disappointing for sure. Stars last line i thought closed strong. Stars verse had the structure set up, Dez you stopped makin line markers after the first line i don't know why.
Keep it live both of ya'll...
Vote STAR

The Star I thought you verse was good a bit weaker then you past battles, though definately.
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