aight well I dont know soo much about structure, punches etc..but if one of those raps were meant to be done on audio Id pick state capitols since it has more flow and rythm plus the rhymes are better and make more sense.
Don, yours werent bad either but some of the shit just sounded straight outta kindergarden
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