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Old 07-02-04, 12:48 PM   #10
illiance
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I can't even vote yet cos of my post count but I'm gonna crit anyways:

Nightcrawla far surpassed Buddha in everyway, but that still was poor. I saw a few punchlines that have been played for years like the gay jail thing but that was about it, the rest of it was filler, the whole thing was just filler - if you rhymed that verbally to someone they wouldn't remember any of it to recite back because it was so forgetable. I could tell you wanted to come hard but it just sounded stupid and monotonous, the same old same old that all wannabe rappers spit - listen im not hating, it's just you have potential if you broadend your mind and vocab a bit you'd be a scary contender.

Buddha: I can tell you're just here for laughs, you don't seriously wanted elevate otherwise you'd actually try and write a verse rather than a limerick, if you wanna elevate, try harder. fool.

And anyone that voted for Buddha is blatently dickriding, how can you think that was better? what the fuck? you must be aliases or some shit.

Peeze.
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