Aight I'm here for crits for the moment cos I don't have enough posts, so here goes:

DaTruth: I liked you style, you had potential to spit out some decent punches to make unfortunate look, unfortunate. But the punches you brought were mediocre at best, although I liked the pot head line. You basically need improvement in your rhyming structure, I mean you rhymed "my style" with "my stle" which doesn't win any points, you jus sound like Cormega (u wish). The switch blade line was nice also, bascially i see potential and room to elevate.

Unfortunate: You came harder in attitude, but attitude in verses are way over played - two weapons a mic and a gun?? It just sounds like you're compensating for being a skinny white kid (although u may not be) cos a real "Gangsta" shouldn't preach about it on the internet. Anyways, loadsa net mc's do it so it's ok i guess if you combine it with decent punches and personals but i don't think you had any - learn some metaphors and punches and you'll be a decent contender in no time.

Peeze.

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