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Old 07-02-04, 01:21 PM   #12
Orijinal
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
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Lil-trip had better punches all the way thru..soliders yours were weak..u need to be more complex in your punchlines..both of u also need to pick up your vocabulary and make your flow better..good battle this is how it breaks down:

Opener: Lil-Trip
Closer: Lil-Trip
Punches: Lil-Trip
Personals: Soldier
Multies: None
Vocabulary: Tied
Structure: Lil-Trip
Flow: Lil-Trip

Vote-Lil-Trip
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Can yall both please vote honestly and professionally on this battle, we need votes i wanna end it already:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...920#post1380920
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