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Old 07-02-04, 02:32 PM   #27
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Both of you sucked, plain and simple.

Y'all need to work on your flow. Both of you need to make sure your syllables match in your bar. The flow is ruptured when one line has more syllables that the line it's supposed to rhyme with.

Both of you need to work on your personals. The punches were weak and you had me yawning. Blaq, I see potential in your spit, just work on the flow and your vocab.

vote/Blaq

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