i can't vote on this one cuz... Hoops urs was real creative from good use of simple words to the bright ass colors (lol) which was real talented... and g-Ballz i liked your use of words and ya structure... that was so damn close i can't even vote on that... i could relate to both!
*hold up, this shit hit home...*
did you find someone else to fill the empty space in your soul?~
were you seduced while in a unstable condition not in control?~
I missed you forever and I wanna tell you my feelings never changed~
but I want you to be happy if it costs me being mental and deranged......
^^G-Ballz

that was after i found out my ex-boyfriend over 4 months cheated on me... lol now baby gurl got a lifetime thug-ass nigga...
damn i gotta give it to G-Ballz fa that...
vote/ G-Ballz

i liked urs too Hoops!!!

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