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Old 07-02-04, 03:39 PM   #22
~Lady Fiya~
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METAHphysikz: best lines were the closing that's a plus...

Like "Lesbian Alcoholicz"..U "Constantly" Using My "Name-In-Ur-Barz"..My Flames-Leave-U-Scared..
Ur Rymez Are Wakk..Go Blame-Who-You-Sharked..I Know Its "Online"..But Wordz "Aim-At-Ur-Heart" ..
Dangerous U Got Me Believin-Ur-Dreamin..U Bein 'Hott' Is 'All In Ya Head' Like "Steamin-Cerebrals"..
Ur Career-Is-On-Teeters..U Failed Dyke Films..So Now U On A 'Gay Sitcom' Called "Leave It Its Beaver"..

~^This nigga came hard...

DML: best lines were
I'll Humiliate And Eradicate Your Rhyming Existence,
The Gauntlet Has Dropped, You Better Ask For Assistance,
Don't Bother Back Down Cause Of Resistance,

~^not bad but i guess the time limit was a restriction u normally come harder...

opener: METAH
closer: METAH
punches: METAH
wordplay: BOTH more to DML's side
vocab: of course DML (good job mami)
flow: both

*i got mad typin' skills i don't write i type once sumone challenges me but uhmm if Metah cheated then that's bogus there ain't no proof... good luck*

my vote: METAHphsiKs
Get At Me
MFG
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