hmm... body count, you had potential punches... like that sign off line.. coul dof been ya finisher if you would worded much better.. but all in all it was a ok verse.. most of your lines seemed a tad bit stretched.. just work on shortening you lines, and your verse will be alot more flow efficient..

K- you had a nice drop.. it had some nice multies, and a few ok punches.. i believe it was a lil better, due to the flow of it and the structure...

due to that...

my vote goes to K

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