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Old 07-02-04, 06:11 PM   #8
roop
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so who the fuk u giving a 30mins deadline?...
or u scared i could kill u with with my deadly lines?....
nigga all i gatta do is CALL U BITCH 1 TIME/and u see urself spitting from the bottomline/
listen...im d captain of the boat/if u think u welcomed aboard,you gats ta be a fucking goat/clap ur ass to d ground/nigga i could sell u for a fucking pound/get u ate by my hound..cos u just the shitty MC arround/u pussynigga..cant pull a fucking trigga/infact u would pee on ja jeanz/when u see me on the streets/im untouchable..this spit is topnotchabe/whateva u call me i push it away/betta dont say im a bitch and u safe/b4 calling me out u should have thought twice/cos i aint letting u go after i clap u up twice/thats it,i got u in grains of rice....huh?

The only thing bad about the verse is da structure and thats it.

Mulities-Few
Flow-Good
Punches-Alrite
Complexity-This is the only place Infintie got you
Orignality-Good Wordplay
Overalll-Good verse but not great


yo your lines were terrable, you, couldn't create one label/
your minds not stable, and all ya lyrics are slurred and think ur a rebel/
i'll twist this bitch into a differen't shape, shiver n quake u sliverin snake/
im here 4 every diss dat u take, u are just a little hoe dat i really hate/
This bitch couldn't rap... if I bitch slapped her for bein so crap/
I have no remorse, it'll be just pain i'll force, it'll be like relay laps/
half this shit you said clearly didn't make any sense, are u depressed/
damn i would be if I had you on my case everyday, your a phony!!!!/
Take da shit inside............... it'll show dat infinit is killin dis nit wit/
all i gotta say is hi to make ur wrists slit wid one of my disses dats hit!/

Flow-Good
Mulities-None
Punches-Weak
Complexity-This is the only place Infintie got you
Overalll-Ok verse, close battle

Very Close Battle, but i will have to go with the verse i was feeling more, no disrespect to you infinite.

Vote XXXtasy

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