View Single Post
Old 07-02-04, 08:16 PM   #10
Yehti
pze.
 
Posts: 55
Post

IP:

-Doubleedge.
tongue twisted, ya mist it, lost all ya class/
couldn't exstinguish heat, with a match to ya ass/
flow was coo, multi was aight, punch was weak
buyin albums like G unit, you both be the fakers/
so I'm crushin ya disk, like my profession was CD Breaker!/
flow was coo, multi was streched a lil', punch was aight, would've been better worded differently
take it or leave it, failure you breath it/
still fallin behind, attempt tailin achievement/
liked the flow, co multi, punch was wack
lookin at ya air flares, boy, they still lack execution/**
logic like reverse psychology, 'cause you brag about losin/
flow was average, punchline was aight, wording is off


-Cdbreaker.
im a 8th grade kid with crazy skill/
im a killa with words cuz my rhymes r ill/
average flow, no punchline
everyone on this site is thinkin' they can rap/
but they really can't rhyme their words worth crap/
average flow, weak diss
you cant freestyle you should just pass/
cuz when its all over you'll be kissin' my a$$/
average flow, weak diss


Overall, Doube got this. He had the wittier lines, more complex flow, and a little more creativity. Double, work on your wording and creativity some more. You're getting close to being decent mayne. Cd, work on creativity, a more complex flow and forming punchlines. Keep at it duns.

Vote - DoubleEdge.