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Old 07-02-04, 09:19 PM   #13
Yehti
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-Gballz.
I know why you called etcetera because your whackness goes on forever~
you couldn't take control of this battle if your hand was on a lever~
flows average, switch the lines around, cause the top punch was a decent personal
ha called me a punk in a battle thread but I didn't battle you cuz I ain't harm herbs~
and because you is one you tried to cure me of sickness but I retaliate with verbs~
average flow, weak punch
all you can do is "blow" shit like the wind but you ain't close to blowing me away~
bitch you couldn't burn me if you were already in the sun goddamn suns ray~
aight wordplay, average flow, weak punch


-Etcetera.
all i do is spit flows, sniff coke, rip flows
you a bitch so all you do is spit slow
liked the multis, flow, no punchline though
yo you aint a thug you dont even heat is
what you competin with? i spit and make concrete give
liked the multis, coo flow, bad wordplay make the punch weak
you sound like a virgin to rb for the first time
cuz the dopest lyrics you ever kicked was my worst line
liked the flow and multis, the punch is played out though


Overall, G got this. He had the strongest line and the better verse overall. Et had the flow. G, work on your creativity a little. You had a decent personal in ya verse. Work on a more complex flow aswell. You're doin' aight. Et, work on your wittiness and creativity, since you already got the flow down.

Vote - Gballz.