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Old 07-02-04, 09:19 PM   #7
The Black Plague
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Pretty good battle, both had good verses, but spanky takes it with better wordplay and flow

Lyrikal- Good verse, your opener was tight, but after that you didn't have nothin that stuck out. You had some good punches, and your personals hit good, but you could've had some better vocab. Also, some of your lines were way long while others were short. Work on struc and wordplay.

Spanky- Good verse from you also. Your opener was wack, but your second line was dope. You came pretty solid throughout your verse, you had solid punches and good personals. Your wordplay was better than his, and your struc was better so you get my vote.
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