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Old 07-03-04, 12:03 AM   #37
L.E
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Ten Lines is all I need to ffed these mc's that is recruitin for a team.
I create rhymes and descimate other mc'z rhymes so i make sure they can't reply/
Way too stretched...
Why lie, I never Lie cause being nice is something i can't deny.
Don't use lie twice...fucks up flow...forced multi...
The kid prodigy so nice, I got jadakiss asking god why/
Uneven ryhme scheme...don't do it...only 2 ryhming lines...
This ain't nothing for me I'm used to challenges.
Being nice and being humble, it's hard but I balance it/
A'ight bar...
I mean some times you gotta be cocky to certfy yourself as a good mc.
Stretched...
My rhymes is nice white powder, It was bout time I let him see/
Too elementary..."mc and see"? A six year old could do that...
I'm from the hood but I'm tryoing to get out.
Got more then 50 cent in the banks, so young buck in the game but he need to sit out(all the G-Unit Members)/
Attempt at punch...but way too stretched. If you would shortened the second line and made the first longer, woulda been a nice punch too.
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