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Old 07-03-04, 12:08 AM   #20
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that wasnt my vote kid

datruth-your verse was okay.....wasnt really feeling your verse that much.....punches was played and you concepts was weak.....punches didt hit that hard and kinda fell off.....structure was okay aswell as your flow.....elevate a little bit and shit should be good

Un-your verse was okay.......your structurew was working for you aswell as your flow that was on point........punches hit hard and stuck allthought you could reword them so that they hit harder but other then that your shit was good

keep it up

v/unforunate