note: at least tell the kid what he needs to work on...shit, anyways u doin ur thing, it was good for what it was, a scene, this shit made me picture me about 7 years ago,this was a good piece in the fact that it wasnt a battle.......it set up the setting and the visual as a good story, sound like a over rebelious teen tryin to get at ur parents......

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