WOW: these were two amazing pieces of work
both: very vivid emotion in your writing style, great use of words
both had incredible flow,easily and well read
emotional use of words from both.....this is hard to vote on,
because u both are true poets, props
But::: i think i have to give this to hoops because of the fact that when i think of true love i think of a significant other aka boyfriend, but since i was challenged in my thinking by hoops(he surprised me with mother) then ima have to give it to him...
VOTE:Hoops

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