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Old 07-03-04, 03:20 AM   #4
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-Datruth29.
Iv'e read your flows, and you're really Just A Bitch Player/
I'm about to "drop bars" on this punk, like CLumbsy Brick Layers/
flows average, wordplays aight, punch was aight
Like a Fat bitch trying to get into a narrow space I leave you Stuck/
You're the "slut mc", in every battle you get "Fucked"/
flows average, good wordplay, played punch
You chose to battle me, you must be the careless Type/
I'll slap you and throw you to the ground like a Pair of dice/
flow was coo, wordplay was good, pretty coo punchline
this is lyrical tug a war, who do you think you're tryna Pull Wit/
yo mouth is like the asses of male cattle, all that's comes ot it is Bull SHit/
liked the flow witht he multi, wordplays good, punchlines aight
you're gassed up, like fat kids uncontrollably releasing Obscene Farts/
but yo heart pumps kool-aid, so you're really nothin but a "Sweet Heart"/
flow good once again with the multi, liked the wordplay, punch was weak


-Verbalviolence.
aight kid listen to these playa scripts//1.
ima give u da truth 29 times just so u dont get it flipped//2.
cuz ima violent kid when i come around da truth gets told he a trip//3.
flows average, no wordplay, weak personal
i aint into ur last sentamental line cuz you think its just fine//4.
but to the gay world its a crime//5.
flow was coo, weak wordplay and punchline
he 1-2 tellin me i get fucked in a battle well it happind to you//6.
ima serve him on verbals dish with a side line of yo moms pussy a.k.a fish//7. im the yupe to start a battle and finish he takin it like it was harry potter quiditch//8.
flows coo, weak punch, aight wordplay
u need to quit it and start commin wit somthin real and spit it//9.
u aint da truth just admit it//9.
ciz i take this battle witht he power like pop eyes spinach//10.
liked the multis, flows good, wordplays coo, punchlines weak


Overall, Truth got this. Truth had the hardest and harder lines in this battle. Both had some flow. Truth, work on your consistency, creativity a little, and touch up on your wording mayne. Ya getting there. Verb, work on your wittyness and forming punchlines. Just keep at it mayne.


Vote - Datruth29.