WARNING: This vote is not a reflection of how good you are
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but a reflection of how good you were to the other battle
Young Dez-
ok opener... 1st line a little stretched compared to 2nd... 5/10
Quote:
yo star don't play around wit me cuz i got guns dat pop like pringles/
it will make u lean back like Fat Joe's single
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a little more w/p and this bar would have been ok... 4/10
Quote:
battling me u must be insane
I'll snatch away yo life like 50 snatched ja rule's chain
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a little personal... needs better structure... 4/10
Quote:
u broke and I hold grands like da Rubba Band man
but nobody know dis cat like da rest of da D12 band
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not really doin anything to him... bad punch... 3/10
Quote:
on the mic I 'll dismantle dis man like P.Diddy did Da Band
and da gun will put u to an early sleep like its da Sandman
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2nd line a little stretched compared to 1st startin to slack off in punch... 3/10
Quote:
I don't even wanna battle dis chump
he gay he the type of guy who rolls around wit high heels and pumps
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ok closer but stretched 2nd... 4/10
Quote:
I'll kill u and battling u tipsy
cuz u fuckin wit Young Dez da Prince of da City
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*The-Star*-
some ok vocab and w/p good opener... 7/10
Quote:
Non-talented, couldn’t think of ya own, your whole spit is based on celebrity names
Non-creative, can’t be original you’ll never have fame in the battling game
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ok r/s alrite flow ... 6/10
Quote:
Should get protection for your chest, cuz you wouldn’t wanna get popped
But the way these words are hitting you, you just automatically drop
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good r/s good flow a bit of punch...7/10
Quote:
The words that you write compare to wind, they just blow by
My words stick in ya head cuz my flow smooth, straight leave ya mouth dry
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ok punch needed better w/p on the 2nd... 6/10
Quote:
Could never stop dropping these rhymes, that's why I'm on top of tha grind
Unlike you, you suck, you wouldn’t succeed if ya talent was working in the coal mind
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good closer closer 2nd a little stretched... 6/10
Quote:
Scientist drill holes to get to the earth’s core
I’m doing what they doing to ya brain, leaving you eternally lyrically sore
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overall- The-Star had a better structure...eg word/play and rhyme/scheme
...the punchlines were ok too
vote- The-Star
peace...