infared- i liked that verse...
...but i dont think it made much of a battle thread...
try to set it up a bit better so you got funny punchlines and shit for a text...
but i think that would make an ok audio to the beat of somthing like the outro the OBIE TRICE CHEERS album...

Yehti- your verse was set up better and you had some funny punchlines there
overall you had a better battle thread good word play rhyme scheme...

good work by both...

vote- Yehti

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