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Old 07-03-04, 12:02 PM   #11
Shadows edge
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heres the problem with your flow... your lines are too long. try to cap them at 15 syllables, and keep most of them around 13 i would say. also, for example, rebel and label dont rhyme too well, because its just an end rhyme, but its on two syllable words so it sounds odd. basically, if you use words with multiple syllables, try to get at least two syllables rhyming. also in battles, dont worry so much about flow or multis... you really gotta work on your punches.
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