eww

ex: you had good flow good personals good punches.....saw a couple good meta's your structure wasnt the best but it was pretty dope..your opener was ok...your closer was better though...overall your shit was aiight

venom: wack u need to elevate and dont put / at the end of your lines put ..........you should atleast be able to put 5 "." if not then the line is probably too long..........bad punches bad personals........bad structure..elevate

vote: ex

i aint gon poll vote until u drop an honest explained vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

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