Shytown came out pretty weak in this, the punches werent hittin. The structure and flow was good though, but this is a battle and its not a poetry reading. Shytown yoy gotta open and close hard, if you can catch peoples attention from the start then you got a better chance of getting their vote. Also end hard, it helps to crush their pride.

Orijinal: nice verse, you had good personals, the flow was pretty syck and structure made it easy to read. You came out of the box hard and finished him off right away. Good battle