Ight- best lines went like this ....
Spul- had 3 nice bars in this ...
Yes, I jus rhymed wit the same endin’, but still… I fuckin’ merked you
Cuz yo verse had me confused like Kutcher, but I’m askin’… “Where’s yo flow, dude?” - The closer was pretty funny- Decent Opener, and I liked the bar with the Andy Roddick punchline... Like I already said you've come better than this before, but nice verse... it had good structure, good punches, nothing spectacular but a good verse.
State- Your verse wasn't too great, I think the structure was kinda strange and some of your punches missed the mark, and some were just basic... example
Beatin me is Not possible, Punches will put you in the hospital........
How You gon' defeat me when you can't get passed the smaller opsticles.... - decent flow here, but no real solid punches....---You Aint Part of a Crew, DId You Even Read the Blue-Print.......
The Plan Was To steal your beats and then Get Rid Of You,
Cause You Worthless Like Buttons and Lint................
I Seen Your Pic, Everyone Look, Mr.Bean Is Back..........
SPul can't produce, soundclick page Full Of Wack Tracks..........-- This part is why I vote for spul... its just really basic, the punches are weak- I've seen you come much better than this- Good luck in the future both, but Vote Spul...

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