Bomberman your verse was alright structurally but creativly it was poor. There was not much in the way of creativity or originality and the wordplay lacked too, plus there wasn't one punchline in there whihc hit it's target. Anyways I guess I can see potential as long as you keep learning and elevating it's all good man good luck.

Lunatic your verse started off well and I thought you were going to easily rip him but your whole style fell off after the first two lines: although they didn't contain punches or personals I just thought they flowed nicelt and it was a good opener. After that though it was pretty poor, just because you put ""s around a word it doesn't make the line a punchline.

However, overall Lethal's was marginally better than Bomber's, structurally and creativly.

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