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Old 07-03-04, 10:23 PM   #15
Malefic
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Illiance
I rip emcees at sick degrees your quick to freeze,
Literally "de-feat" you as my wit can split your knees,
d-feat....really played out. 3/10
Your too thick to read-that's Da Truth-so stop boasting,
Your punches are easily dodged like you rhyme in slowmotion,
personal...so-so metiphore. 3/10
I'm bruisin foes, abusing hoes an now this loser knows,
The only way he'll win is trhough dickriding and crew votes,
pretty good. simple but nice. 5/10
It's jus' stupid bro-how can you think to fight this?
When your rhyme scheme's as wobbly as a one legged cyclist?
creative at anything. 5/10
Despite this I'm readily relaxed an I'll walk steadily past,
Cos you can't spit at me with your own head in your ass.
your sayin your closer to his ass than ne thing. 1/10
You kinda kill'd yourself with that closer there. But otherwise. Your flow was nice. Work on some harder punches tho. Good job.
17/50

Datruth
I'm so agressive on mics I make Manikins Blink n Flinch/
while this hypochadriac only Thinks he's SIck/
i thought hypochadriac's....always thought they were SICK? 6/10
thinkin that he flows like water, yet he sinks in shit/
either way man, I attack the way a Tiger should/
yo ass wouldn't even be "up to par" if you were Tiger Woods/
Tiger's usually sub-par....woulda been a better punch that way. 5/10
you know that I am good, I stand tall like Goliath stood/
I'm more than 100 steps ahead of you.......with a Giant foot/
no. 3/10
I'm Spittin Heat at you to "roast" you like any Enimies/
it's like yo saliva's made from Liquid Nitro, you never Spit The "Heat"/
didnt really flo 3/10
I have a tendency to blow bitch MC's up to Smitherines/
My Punchlines didn't just punch you.. they threw everything at you..
even the Kitchen sink/.....
Blah closer 3/10
You definitly had the best line in the battle. You seemed pretty witty wit your punches. You oughta just work on your flo a bit. It threw me off at some times. Nice Work.
20/50

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