bomberz... You fist bar did not rhyme..
the second bar was a simple rhyme and didn't make sense..
3rd bar was simple rhyme scheme and whack punch

the 4th and 5th were also weak, should I have to explain more..

Lethal your verse was ok, some of it was mediocre though, but it flowed better, with better stucture..

V/Lethal

Yo, return tha favor in one of my battles, will you?
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132827

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132904

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133042

Peace......