alright verbal heres your problem...your structure is the ugliest thing next to Michael jackson i mean space them out..u have talent we can see that but dont have it like a paragraph..it looks ugly and viewers wont want to peep it

verbal: ur punches were ok nothin special
structure still smell like poo poo poooo
your flow was aiight...but the structure ruined it
your personals i saw effort and potential


da truthL u had better structure
better punches..shit was bangin playa
ur personals were hittin pretty hard
good flow..i culd read it clearly

vote: datruth

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