Umm...Yeah
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JaeBurnz354 Drop:
Hurry up and post back after me, i don't got time.
Say my name, that's only way you'll say a hot line
ha 1st line was weak and 2nd line was a self-glorification line 3.5/10
You spit hard but i bet if i seen you it would be a hi now.
It was live befo, but when i came round it became a shy town
u used his name atleast....but still weak 5/10
Take that icon off you wish you was pac.
Take a look at our names, I'm jae burnz, so you not hot
what the fuck self-glorification line again! and don't use hot twice in 3 bars not a smart move boi 1/10
overall: 4/10
Shytown Drop:
yo flyweight don't eva let yo gaurd down burnz betta look out
cuz i took out enough of yo fam 2 have a muthafuckin cookout
blah! barbeque style used his name against him properly tho 5/10
yo be like kanye west and start walkin with christ
cuz fuckin wit me is more of a gamble den a pack of dice
aight wordplay but self-glorification second line 5/10
u don't kno dat i'll murda u and and do it again in da after life
belive me u lost yo mine rushin me 2 spit my line
i'm shYtowm i don't care bout yo life nigga cuz i got time
weak weak weak yet again 4.5/10
overall: 4.8/10
vote goes to shytown
do a honest vote on my shit links in my signature etcetera .vs. me
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