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Old 07-04-04, 02:15 AM   #9
Ca'lam
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mmmm..

woody:
I have a hard time believing that you're from a "battle joint".....
Fuckin wit me, your career will reach its ending point.....
^ok.. on the weaker side for a opener..but ok
You think u can beat me?? I think your having a wet dream....
Your punches comes softer than melted neopolitan ice cream....
^strongest punch, it was decent..lil weak to be the best tho

one:
when spoken my words-can addict with flow and most-of-my-cursing..
cats keep recordings on their person, you can even overdose-on-my-verses..
^eh..flowed good..good multies..but wheres the punch?bad opener,good bar tho..
I hack-n-splinter, laugh-n-rip-ya, im gonna smack-this-bitch-up...
the kids liar.. even if he copped “anal” he couldnt “back-his-shit-up”..
^second line had nice punch...
slow-ta respond.. n hit.. youd think after 100 posts-ya rhymes'd-be-iller..
lines-are-just-filler.. bout as exciting as "corn flakes" n im the "serial" killer..
^eh..sounds good..weak punch tho


this is shit you get scars-off... burn him with shit you get charred-from..
Watch when his verse comes.. he'll be actin thug but cant get a "hard-on"..
this kid starts beef with me for no reason, look how decent i treat-him..
didnt wanna battle, but i removed half my brain to make this thing even..
^decent closer..might have won it for you
overall:it came down to the flow and structure of the verses..punch wise, they were both close to the same..flow goes to band, and so does structure..

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