Banned: Cheating
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IP:
This was a pretty evenly matched battle. I dont think either of you opened well, Spanky had to explain his punch...thats never cool to do that. If its that hard peeps should be able to get it. You and You are perfect rhymes I guess...I would reccomend using them together though man. I noticed that you did try to use some wordplay with better-than and surrender-man...but better and surrender dont go together well.
You did have a good structure and the flow wasnt bad at all on the verse...but you closed out weak...you gotta leave peeps sayin man that was ill.
Lyrical you had a tight flow, you really need to elevate your vocab though, you can only rhyme with them little words so much before its played. I have noticed how much youve improved your structure, I think ive criticized you enough on that and you finally got it. You opened your battle good, and you used a personal. You had a few punces they werent that good but they was aight. Now when you closed...your last line was ILL, I was totally feelin that shit.
I give him this battle because his flow was more on point, and he opened hard, and closed hard. (better consistency)
v/Lyrical
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