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Old 07-04-04, 03:53 AM   #11
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Originally Posted by Limited Edition
Well...this was an a'ight open mic. You need to work on structure length...and verse consistancy. Your rhyme scheme was a'ight...but I saw a lot of forced multies in there...overall...a'ight piece.


Agreed. structure and consistancy could use a little polishin for sure. Not a bad drop - prolly sounds better in audio than it looks in text. I ain't heard of J-Limit productions - ya'll got a soundclick page?
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