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Old 07-04-04, 12:03 PM   #30
QBsmasher
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Nice battle...ups to both of you.

E-Dubz, I was feelin all the multis that you had in there, they really made your flow a lot better. The structure wasnt too bad there was one line in there that was a lil streched. Wasnt really feelin the punches, you had some tight lines, but they didnt seem like they connected with him. You did close the battle pretty tight though, if all the punchlines were like that it woulda been better.

Hoops you had a nice line to open the battle, lol flying with chickens. Your punches were pretty consistent all the way thru, nothing was really spectacular, the one like about him battling his shadow and losing was funny though. You aint really use many multis, he beat you up there. Your flow was pretty straight though, most of your battles are usually easy to read. The closer I wasnt really feelin, maybe I just didnt get it I dunno.

Hoops threw punches consistently throughout his battle, more so than e-dubz did.

v/hoops