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Old 07-04-04, 03:11 PM   #7
Know-Gimix
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this was a cool battle... I love short ones-- quick to the point--- iight heres my breakdown


Opener- etcetera flowed really well but the punch was a little weaker than G-Ballz, I really felt the way he worded his first bar.
Flow- (multies, readability)- I think etcetera had more flow in his verse, a whole bunch of multis- it rhymed nicely
Punchlines - I liked both of you, but neither of you came to sick with the punches, I'd have to say you were both kind of even, you each had a couple strong lines and you each had a couple weak ones... I think the strongest punch in the battle goes to G-Ballz opener though.

I think this was kinda close, and if it had to go on just rhymability I'd give it to etcetera, but I think G-Ballz had stronger content in the beggining of his verse so vote G-Ballz.... please hit this up -- http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453
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