this was a good battle- both of you showed some skill in this- here my favorite lines

so he stepped where he had thrown up,
& if we are saying moms the word . . .
than ur word on the street is a known slut. - lmao at that closer... nice punch there... your rhyme scheme was definately original and it had a good flow... overall verse gets an 8 outta 10

step up to me and ill blaze ya feet, like athletes w. no Tinactin
u'll fail to speak, when i raise the heat, n see exactly how the tin's-actin - this was a pretty nice opener... good wordplay- not a killer punchline but nice just the same... Your verse was good, the only reason ima vote for Apo is cuz his closer stuck hard- and I didn't see any punches that compared to it in your verse.... Vote Apo---
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

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